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Chapter 1 : Page 04

posted December 14th, 2009, 10:11 am


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December 14th, 2009, 10:11 am

enjelicious

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sorry for the late pages.. im lazy to type set T_T

@maiapot: oiii ano na story = ))

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December 14th, 2009, 11:27 am

Amante

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That's a daring promise haha

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December 14th, 2009, 12:29 pm

Jazeki

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The third panel is creepy. XD

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December 14th, 2009, 7:01 pm

Ren-chin

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You need to update more often! This stories so interesting and theres only 5 pages xD!

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view Amante's profile

December 15th, 2009, 10:53 pm

Amante

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ooooooh you've gotten a fellow artist to work with as well? This will be interesting

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December 28th, 2009, 6:15 pm

stinastaysober

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hehe. I wonder what will happen next. ^ ^

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January 5th, 2010, 5:04 pm

HaKu10

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I love gender-bender stories! They're so awesome! X3

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February 11th, 2010, 11:54 pm

flynfreako

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please update! i adore this storyline and the art is awesome!

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July 3rd, 2010, 12:29 am

rakka981

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nice.

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February 1st, 2011, 4:10 pm

flyingpeanuts (Guest)

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princes are meant to be charming, not sincere

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April 10th, 2011, 7:56 pm

UNknown-artist

Typos

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Ooh I'm excited to read all of this! Creepy person in the last panel is funny.
I just want to point out some typos, though.

"...every fairy tales..." get rid of the "s" on "fairy tales"
"It really do only..." replace "do" with "does"
"...met with this lifetime..." put "in" between "with" and "this"
"They tell you promises but then breaks it" should be "They tell you promises but then they break them"
Hope that is helpful :)

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April 11th, 2011, 8:08 am

enjelicious

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@unknown artist: thanks for the corrections! and i'll try my best to be good at engriish haha

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April 27th, 2011, 8:12 pm

renchikolul

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Man she's lucky she can just magically turn into a guy i got to wait until im 18 and have the money to cBE ONE!!! Though i do love this story despite being envious

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August 27th, 2011, 5:19 am

ryu (Guest)

i agree.

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The art is really nice however there are too many grammatical errors. I guess it would be better to have a partner o adviser about script-writing. In that way you'll save time. :)

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